Talk:Jack Dorsey/@comment-5543751-20120925013510

Peer Review By Steve Saint-Ulysse:

I really like this article. I never knew the name of the founder of twitter till now. Jack Dorsey has really changed the way people communicate. Personally I like how this product was used during the Libya uprising, it played a major role.

One thing I notice about this article was a missing part. It doesn’t affect the article that much. I notice some repetition on some parts, which should be touched up on. Other parts seem to lack information but it wasn’t a major issue. The formatting could have been better, little more chronological and orderly.

What I really appreciate about this article is the key issue it tackled. They informed their readers about the Libya movement, Square, which is a valuable asset to Jack’s legacy, Twitter’s rapid growth, its dedicated user base, how the first tweet was “Just setting up my twttr” which I thought was awesome, and the fact that twitter’s inception came from getting taxi drivers better communication. They brought those things to light and it was a really good piece of article. Good Job!