Talk:Grace Hopper/@comment-184.1.53.3-20120927015818

Great information everyone! Usually when I read biographies or research pieces on a specific person, information becomes reperitious. When reading through your assigned topics however, all of facts were fresh and to the point. Thanks for making this an enjoyable reading experience.

With that said, I would have liked to learn more about her early years. While all the information there was great, I felt like it was lacking the detail to represent her as a person. For this, you could just find more activities that she participated in as a child or even something that happened in her life that encouraged her to become an information scientist.

While I stand by the fact that the information on this page was great, it could have been presented in a more reaadable manner. Seperation between the large clumps of words in the form of smaller paragraphs would have done it justice. Other than that minor grammatical issues and some problems with sentence structure were my only complaints.

All in all, the information was clearly presented in a deilberate way that made it easy for a reader to understand and enjoy. Thanks for taking the time to do it right!

(Reviewed by Justin Toler on 9/26 at 9:58)