Talk:Michael Buckland/@comment-68.59.54.119-20120927020542

Nicely done group. You all did a fantastic job filling this Wiki with a lot of great information regarding Michael Buckland and the history of his work. I really appreciated the fact that this was very well written and thoroughly completed.

A few minor adjustments that may have complimented this Wiki would have been to chunk information when possible instead of repeating it in an additional paragraph. This would help maintain the readers focus by cutting down the length of the paragraph. Also, this would increase the solidity of the entry by removing any redundant information and keeping the sentences short and relevant to each individual topic at hand.

Once again, this Wiki presented great information. All of the authors did a great job collaborating their work. The sources were found to be credible and recent, but I would recommend not citing at the end of each individual entry. In order to limit confusion and increase scan ability, I would recommend a "references" section for future projects of the same manner.

The content of this Wiki was very educational and the writing was immaculate. It may be able to use a little rearranging, but awesome page for the most part. Great job!

-Rondrick Rose Reviewer