Talk:Grace Hopper/@comment-5546086-20120925225404

I think that this entry was very nicely done. I liked how the different authors for each section were clearly laid out.

Some things that might have been improved upon are minor grammatical issues, such as small things like missing words and minor spelling issues. Other things like run-on sentences (like in the first paragraph, for example) were a slight issues. Also, be certain that all the paragraphs meet the 250 word minimum. Section 4 was slighly under the word minimum.

Overall, I think this was an excellent entry. I the content was of good quality and left the reader intrigued about Grace Hopper.

(Chelsea Thorn)